Wednesday 12 September 2018




GIRLS VS BOYS
I am going to give you three reasons why girls are better than Boys.  Firsty, Girls are more mature than boys. Second, Girls smell nicer. And lastly, Girls have a better sense of style.       
                             
Firstly, Girls are more mature. We talk about normal things and boys talk about non normal stuff and other stuff. Girls don’t laugh at silly things like boys do. When girls get mad at each other they don’t punch someone or hurt someone. Sometimes girls just say hurtful words. Boys also giggle at when someone does a fart, I mean we all do farts.

Secondly,  Girls smell Nicer. If we play a sport we don’t roll around in the mud like boys do. Some girls I mean most girls buy expensive perfume where boys just go as there smelly old self. Girls shower more often where boys just say I’ll flag it. Girls wear clean clothes everyday but some boys wear the same clothes they did yesterday.

Last but not least, Girls have a way better taste of styles than boys. For starters boys wear knee hight shorts and we wear normal short denim  shorts. Girls are always going shopping for new clothes and boys never get new clothes. Girls wear super trendy clothes and boys don’t wear trendy clothes. I mean girls and boys both like to label bash but that doesn’t change the fact girls are better than boys.

Yeah But, Boys can be stronger than girls, i’m sure if girls go to the gym and workout  girls will become very strong just like the boys.

To sum it up, We all know girls are more mature than boys, girls smell nicer and girls have a better taste of style than boys.
I hope I have convinces you Girls are better than Boys because we are.

By,

Kayla Leach.


We have been learning to write a persuasive piece of writing to convince  the reader on our opinion of something.  What I enjoyed about this was I got to write about how much girls are better than boys. What I found challenging  was to pick three reasons why girls are better than boys because there are so many reasons why. What I might do next time is change my reasons and add more detail to my reasons.

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