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Dear Santa,

Today I am Writing to you because I think I should be on the Nice list and NOT on the bad list. I hope I will convince you to put me on your NICE list this year.

 Here are 3 reasons why:

1. I’m Helpful at school and home.
2. I try my hardest in my learning
3. I show REACH values in all that I do

                                                       

                    Firstly, I do what I am told by Mum as soon as she ask me sometimes I will do it without her having to ask me.
I do chores around the house like picking up all of the baby stuff so  Mum doesn’t have to.
I always clean the tables at the end of the day so it’s less work for the cleaner.

I am such a big help to Mum because I sort out the change table so that she can look after the babies.

I pick up rubbish around the school to keep it tidy and neat

Secondly, I learn from my mistakes when I get something wrong in maths time ( I never give up.)
I ask for help when I need it the most so that I actually get something done.
I put my thinking maths cap on and try really hard that smoke comes out of my ears I try so hard it’s not funny.
I writing I make sure I do my tidest writing to make it look tidy and neat.  In reading I follow
all the instructions so I can do the activity right and don’t get my page ripped out. At fancy dress I try my hardest to make the dance look good and cool.

Last by not least, I let other people play my games with me if they are alone and have no one to play with.
I let other people use my stationary if they have forgotten there stationary.

I finish learning tasks in the time I am given so I am organized, and not left behind in my learning.

So I can be the best Mangapapa Kid  I can be in my learning.

I listen closely to what I have to do to be on task.

In assembly I am not talking when someone else is talking.

Yeah, but… One time I said something I didn’t mean to and I accidentally hurt there feelings.
But I said I’m really sorry and it won’t happen again and that made them feel better.
Now when I think I’m going to say something unkind I think before I say something,

Now I don’t say anything unkind so I don’t hurt other people’s feelings.

I treat other people the way I would like to be treated.

When I said something mean I felt good until I saw the victim was upset.

To sum it up… I think I should be on your NICE list because on Christmas Eve I give you biscuits and a Beer every year.
I give your reindeer carrots and water every year. I’m really helpful kind and caring.
I help others at school when they are not sure on what to do or a stuck on something.

Lastly…

I’m so good with having 3 brothers even though they can be really annoying sometimes

I hope I have convinced you to put me on your NICE list.

         

Sincerely,

Kayla Leach

We are learning to write persuasive stories You have to use clear reasons and examples to persuade the reader.

What I enjoyed about doing this pieces  was I actually got to sent it to Santa.

What I found challenging about this was I had to put 5 or more sentences in each reason.

What I would do next time would be is to descibe my reasons in a different way.