Monday 14 June 2021

My Lawyer Paragraphing.

 

This is my Lawyer paragraph. The topic we were given was Screen time negatively affects learning . I also have inserted a photo of my feedback.

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  1. Anonymous15 June 2021 at 13:48

    Hi kayla. Nice work on creating your lawyer paragraph, it looks like a good way to structure your writing. Maybe you could just check some of your spelling:) good job.

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  2. Anonymous15 June 2021 at 13:52

    Hi Kayla. This is a great example of the lawyer paragraph, you did a great job. Your percentage and feedback was great, keep up the awesome work. :)

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